What lands in your inbox
These are the real scores from our published sample review (a "Why Olin" supplemental essay), shown so you can see the shape of the email before you send yours.
Does it sound like you?
4 / 5Did you show, or just tell?
4 / 5Does it hold together?
4 / 5Did you actually do something?
4 / 5Could anyone else have written this?
3 / 5Did you earn the ending?
4 / 5
One line on a target school: name a school on the form above, and your scorecard adds one line on how the essay fits what that school publishes as its priorities.
Red flags: 1 of the 7 red flags we check for tripped. The biggest: a paragraph that could be pasted into an essay for any school.
Scores only - what is behind the numbers, and what to fix, is the audit. Sample essay and scores from our published sample review.